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Conference Panels Writing and Publishing Advice #LA18SCBWI (Bonus Jane Austen and Salt-N-Pepa)

Last #LA18SCBWI post was devoted to the amazing (and many!) keynotes, so this post is devoted to the panels. Where the keynotes are largely inspirational, the panels tend to get more into the nitty-gritty of publishing and the craft of writing. These are snippets from each panel, which are done in a Q&A style and often turn into conversations, so these are simple highlights I’ve pulled out and tried to keep in context as much as possible. (And make sure you get all the way to the end to see me dressed as Jane Austen!)

Editor Panel with Laura Godwin, Elizabeth Law, Amanda Maciel, Krista Marino, Francesco Sedita, and Namrata Tripathi:

Question: What makes you keep reading on when considering a manuscript?

  • A pulsing heartbeat throughout the story. – Francesco Sedita (president and publisher of Penguin Workshop at Penguin Young Readers)
  • You can tell when a writer has a deep investment and curiosity about a topic. She takes notice when she doesn’t care about a thing and she is transformed to care about that thing by the writing. – Namrata Tripathi (VP & publisher of Kokila, a newly-formed imprint of Penguin Young Readers dedicated to centering stories from the margins)

Question: What do you see too much or or can’t see enough of?

  • It’s super exciting to see something that’s been done a million times and it’s done in a new way. – Krista Marino (senior executive editor at Delacorte Press, part of Random House Children’s Books)

Question: What is the most important skill a writer for children can possess?

  •  Persistence. Have passion and stay in the game. – Elizabeth Law (editor at Holiday House)
  • An endless curiosity about the world and yourself. You need a great idea and to keep asking questions and developing that idea. – Amanda Maciel (executive editor at Scholastic)
  • A curiosity and drive to satisfy it in an endless loop. – Laura Godwin (vice president and publisher of Godwin Books, an imprint of Macmillan publishers)

Panel “Truth vs. Innocence in Children’s Books” with Elana K. Arnold, Brandy Colbert, Erin Entrada Kelly, Carolyn Mackler, and moderated by Linda Sue Park:

Question: How go you define dark in literature?

  • It’s what I have. When the well has filled us and whatever we’re filled with we have to work with. – Elana K. Arnold
  • Dark is part of life. Leaning into the sadness of life, as I also lean into the the light and find humor in sadness. – Carolyn Mackler
  • The further away from hope, the more interesting the road to coming back. – Erin Entrada Kelly

Question: Tell us the initial spark or kernel for one of your books.

  • After my first two books, I had emptied the well of shame. New water had filled the well, and it was rage. I’m not holding back and saving anything for the next book. – Elana K. Arnold (on her upcoming book DAMSEL)
  • It’s wish fulfillment in an alternate universe. – Brandy Colbert (on her book LITTLE & LION)

Question: How do you respond to critics who say your books are too dark?

  • One of the greatest disservices we do to young people is to underestimate them. – Erin Entrada Kelly
  • I pull out the letters from young readers to show me how important my books are to them. – Carolyn Mackler
  • Children are whole people. Book are a wonderful way to practice saying no. It’s good practice to recognize when they feel uncomfortable or unsafe. – Elana K. Arnold
  • I get really angry because I think of the kids going through those things. It’s telling those kids their lives or experiences are too dark. – Brandy Colbert

Panel “Culture, Identity, and Writing: Where do they intersect?” with Malinda Lo, Dashka Slater, Aida Salazar, Ibi Zoboi, and moderated by Arthur Levine:

Question: Was there a time during the writing that you felt the joyful intersection of culture, identity, and the work at hand?

  • I was writing about my own identity but not my own experiences. When I was telling a complete truth, my own truth, about my culture. – Ibi Zoboi
  • I was proud and joyful to rescue my story from obscurity. It’s a revolutionary act. – Aida Salazar

Question: What are the talismans of power in your writing?

  • I use my writing as a tool for social change. My characters have emotions in spite of white narrative and hostility. – Aida Salazar
  • Having to think of yourself and having to think about how you are being perceived by others in a white space. I always feel like I’m on the outside looking in. I can’t help but having a worldwide perspective. – Ibi Zoboi
  • Using gender and race and performance. The point is to center the Chinese-ness of the character and the point isn’t to be concerned about making sure others get it. – Malinda Lo

Question: As part of a minority culture, do you ask “Is there part of me that I shouldn’t show because it will be too scary?” Do you feel that way in your writing, that you’re censoring a part of yourself?

  • I definitely did. I imagined the characters in ASH as Asian. The gay thing was enough of a problem, so I did not include any Asian-ness in the book. You don’t see these stories that represent you. You have to imagine they exist in the first place. The message is everywhere, no one has to outright tell you. – Malinda Lo
  • Self-censoring comes in telling the truth. It comes when we’re afraid of telling these truths and thinking about who will be mad. – Ibi Zoboi
  • Authenticity is marginalizing. It centers the mythological one story line. – Malinda Lo

Agent Panel with Jenny Bent, Tina Dubois, Kirsten Hall, Kevin Lewis, Ammi-Joan Paquette, and Tanusri Prasanna, and moderated by Alexandra Penfold

Question: What’s strong in the marketplace right now?

  • Books addressing complicated and ugliness of our world. – Kirsten Hall
  • Fiction that digs deep into the personal experience, the heart coming through in a deep way. – Ammi-Joan Paquette

Question: Should you write a book outside your own identity?

  • If you want to write a book outside your culture, if it’s in your heart, then do it. But realize you have to take what comes with that. Actions have consequences. – Kevin Lewis
  • Look internally. Ask yourself why you want to write this book. If you’re writing it just to be diverse, then don’t do it. If you feel it in your loins, then do it. – Tanusri Prasanna

Question: What is your best advice for writers?

  • Be you and do you. Spend a lot of time on your work. – Kirsten Hall
  • Take risks and do something different. – Ammi-Joan Paquette
  • Celebrate any victory. Celebrate yourself. – Jenny Bent

Panel “The Secret of Crafting Engaging Non-fiction” with Jason Chin, Candace Fleming, Deborah Heiligman, and Barbara Kerly, and moderated by Melissa Stewart

  • I believe people’s lives have themes. Look for things in people’s lives that has those themes. – Barbara Kerley
  • A life is a story. It has a beginning, middle, and end. This is why narrative non-fiction works for biographies. – Deborah Heiligman
  • The difference between fiction and non-fiction is like cake. In fiction, I get to buy the ingredients for the cake, bake it up, and gobble it down. In non-fiction, I don’t do the shopping. The ingredients are all crazy, but I still have to make delicious cake. – Candace Fleming

No L.A. conference would be complete without the Saturday night gala. This year’s theme was a tribute to writers and artists. There were tacos and dessert food trucks and dancing. I chose to go as the incomparable Jane Austen. This may or may not have been a tweet about me that night (I’m pretty sure I saw at least one other Jane Austen, but I’m not sure I saw any others dancing to this particular song), “You haven’t lived ‘till you’ve seen Jane Austen dance to Salt-N-Pepa.” 

Keynote Conference Highlights and Writing Advice from #LA18SCBWI

I feel so lucky to have been able to attend the SCBWI Conference in L.A. earlier this month. A big thanks to the SCBWI for sending me out there (I won the trip through my participation in SCBWI BookStop program). For all of you who saw my worries about leaving The Gentleman when he was just barely 1, you’ll be happy to know that he was find while I was gone (and even took a bottle at times!).

There were so many amazing moments that I couldn’t possibly share them all here, so be sure to check out all the SCBWI blog coverage of the conference or #LA18SCBWI on Twitter. The keynotes in particular were amazing, so I’ve devoted this post to those. (I always like to note that I don’t use quotation marks for these snippets because these are from the notes that I’m often frantically taking during talks, so there’s not way to know for sure if it’s a direct quote or if I’m paraphrasing, but I always try to be true to the point the speaker was trying to get across.)

Daniel José Older (He’s super funny!):

  • Words are supposed to sound nice when you put them together, so read out loud before you sub.
  • Beginnings establish what your character wants; they establish their humanity.
  • Every story that we tell is the story of a crisis, where a crisis is a turning point, a moment that everything changes in some significant way.
  • Good books are made of bad decisions.

Ekua Holmes (I love her whole aesthetic…the colors, the flow, the emotions behind it…everything!):

  • Reach back and gather the best of what our past hast to teach us. Reclaim her history, legacy, and sovereignty through art.
  • Our art is always personal. My strategy is somehow to find myself in each of my stories.
  • Confinement in mind and body cannot stop our creativity and desire to be free.
  • Children innately respond to creativity.

Lynda Mullaly Hunt (Her talks are always so full of the passion she brings to her work and for caring about kids.):

  • It’s a very brave act to create something that has never been in the world until you put your hand to the page and share it with others.
  • Young readers need us to care more about them than we care about our careers and ourselves.
  • Children are hungry for optimism–just like the rest of us.
  • Wishes are passive longings. Change your wishes into goals and act on those goals.

Andrea Davis Pinkney & Brian Pinkney (Such an adorable, creative couple…with very different work styles. I’d love to be a fly on their wall.):

  • Every artist have to have a style – B.P.
  • You want the reader to not even know they are reading because they are having so much fun. – A.D.P.
  • Write your own letter to diversity and come back to it in a year to see how you’ve done. – A.D.P.

Libba Bray (She’s a badass–super funny, smart, and thoughtful. See my post about how her keynote inspired by author theme of “find your magic”.):

  • In writing a story, you have to want to know something. The question makes your story come alive, leading us from somewhere we know to something new. The question leads to change.
  • Branding is about answers, about selling stuff. Brands by there very nature are static. It puts writers in a position to view kids as consumers instead of growing young people.
  • Writers need safe places to be able to take risks.
  • We are facing the kind of monsters we read about in books. There has never been a more important time to write for the next generation.
  • If someone asks what your brand is, tell them it’s a commitment to craft and a deep respect for the audience.

Mike Curato (He’s as adorable as his elephant character Little Elliot):

  • Eat cake…but make sure it’s good cake.
  • Think about how happy you were as a kid making art. Create things that make you happy.
  • Think about how small your were as a kid and how things looked, and draw from that perspective.

Lois Lowry (Needs no introduction! This was set up as a chat between Lois and SCBWI co-founder, Lin Oliver.):

  • The reaction of kids to her first book kept her writing fiction for young people. Her sudden awareness of the passion of kids for a book they love.
  • When asked what unifies her as a writer, Lois said intimacy. It’s her one word for her voice. She feels an intimate connection to her reader. The element of human connection is the theme that runs through her books.
  • There are things that are too dark for children, but they’re there. We have to write about those thing, and do it in an intelligent way.

Unfortunately I missed Eliza Wheeler’s keynote because I had to take break to pump breast milk, but there’s a great overview on the SCBWI Conference Blog.

I also popped in and out of Bruce Coville’s keynote (and didn’t get a chance to take notes of what I did hear) because it ran late and I was rushing around getting books signed before I had to catch my flight home. I’ve listened to a keynote of his before, and it was sooo good. You can just tell how much he loves writing for kids and the impact reading can have on them. Again, check out the SCBWI Conference Blog. Him talking about ripples really resonated with me.

I’m hoping to pull some highlights from the panels and workshops I attended for another post, as well as just a fun post about some of the shenanigans that went on during the downtime (You do want to see me dressed up as Jane Austen for the party, right?). Stay tuned!

Heading Out To #LA18SCBWI: Conference Gems Round-Up

I head out for the 2018 SCBWI conference in L.A. in two days! I’ve been super nervous about leaving The Gentleman for four nights (it’s the youngest I’m ever leaving any of the babies for a conference), so I haven’t really had any nervousness left in me for anything else. But as it’s crept closer, I find I’m getting those little butterflies of excitement/nerves about the actual conference.

I was taking a look back all the gems of wisdom and inspiration I have accumulated on the Observation Desk from previous conferences and thought it would be fun to link to those here. (Wow! Look at that, they go all the way back ten years ago! And look at how many conferences I’ve been to.) Here they are:

SCBWI L.A. 2008 Conference Gems: Part 1

SCBWI L.A. 2008 Conference Gems: Part 2

SCBWI L.A. 2008 Conference Gems: Part 3

SCBWI Eastern PA 2010 Conference Wrap Up

Nuggets of Writing Wisdom from SCBWI L.A. 2010 Conference

SCBWI Poconos Conference 2011

SCBWI Poconos Retreat 2012

New England SCBWI 2013 Conference Gems

Thoughts on the New England SCBWI 2015 Conference

New England SCBWI 2015 Conference Gems of Wisdom

New England SCBWI 2016 Conference Words of Wisdom for Writing and Life

 

September #InkRipples: Building a Fictional World

What exactly is world building (or worldbuilding if your prefer is as one word)? Basically, it’s the creation of a fictional world. More than that, though, it’s how that world is explained within the confines of a story. The imagining and creating is the easy part (in my opinion). It’s choosing which pieces to include in the story and how to include those pieces with out a big info-dump that is the tricky part.

The reader must be grounded in the world and be able to feel like they are immersed in it, but you don’t want to bore them with too many details and world-building elements that aren’t essential to the plot and character development. It’s highly subjective, too. One reader may love lavish descriptions and explanations of how one aspect of your fictional world works, while another may skim through all that to get to the action.

And world building isn’t just for fantasy or sci-fi writers. Even if a story takes place in a high school and most of your readers are in high school or have been to one, you still need to establish the world of your high school. There’s a lot already written on ways to execute world building, so instead of me blathering on with tips, I’ll leave some links at the end of the post for you to peruse at your leisure.

Some of my favorite world building exercises have been making a map for the ELIXIR BOUND (see the picture at the beginning of the post and the entry “Exploring the world of Elixir Bound”). For PIRATE ISLAND, part of my world building included creating a chart with realistic tides and moon cycles. So much of my world building goes on behind the scenes, but having all that information in my head makes for a rich world on the page, even if the reader only sees a small portion of what the world entails. Plus, those elements that don’t make it directly into the story are great for things like blog posts and bonuses for readers.

Okay, before we get to the links, I’d love to hear some of your world-building techniques in the comments!

“Tips on World Building for Writers — How to Make Your Imaginary World Real” by Chuck Sambuchino

“The Ultimate Guide to World-Building: How To Write Fantasy, Sci-Fi, And Real-Life Worlds” by Claire Bradshaw

“25 Things You Should Know About Worldbuilding” by Chuck Wendig

(Apparently people named Chuck have a lot to say about world building!)

#InkRipples is a monthly meme created by Katie L. CarrollMary Waibel, and Kai Strand. We pick a topic (September is all about world building), drop a ripple in the inkwell (i.e. write about it on our blogs), and see where the conversation goes. We’d love to have you join in the conversation on your own blogs or on your social media page. Full details and each month’s topic can be found on my #InkRipples page.

New England SCBWI 2016 Conference Words of Wisdom for Writing and Life

Sneaking in some writing time before the conference started.

Sneaking in some writing time before the conference started. #amwriting #selfie

A week and a half later and I feel like I’m still catching up after the New England SCBWI Conference. I’m a little behind on my novel writing goals and I have a few deadlines for other projects creeping up, but the momentum of the writing conference usually keeps me going and focused on my writing goals for months.

One of my favorite things about writing conferences is catching up with old writing friends and meeting new ones. My roommate and I stayed up way too late chatting about writing and family and stuff. I almost literally bumped into a friend I met–well it has to be ten years ago now–at one of the many Poconos conferences I attended, and it was awesome to catch up with her. I squeezed in some writing time on Friday before my first workshop, I gathered with both old and new friends for dinner Saturday night, and I happened to wake up early and couldn’t fall back to sleep on Sunday morning, so I went for a run at the hotel fitness center. It all went by too fast, and I was so exhausted by the time I got home Sunday evening.

To keep the inspiration fresh I like to go through my notes from the conference (something I’ve been meaning to do with past conferences as well). So here are just a few of the words of wisdom I came across during the weekend (note that I don’t use quotation marks because these aren’t necessarily direct quotes, though I do my best to keep them as close as possible to what the speakers actually said and the sentiments are accurate):

  • Marketing is about choices. Choosing to do the things you enjoy and the things you do well. ~Lynda Mullaly Hunt
  • The most powerful marketing tool is to write a helluva book. ~Lynda Mullaly Hunt
  • People are grateful on the inside, but it’s important to be thankful on the outside. ~Lynda Mullaly Hunt
  • This that matter the most in your marketing are also what matter the most in writing: what is uniquely yours and your book, things you care about, and economy & quality. ~Lynda Mullaly Hunt

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  • Kids need to see and identify the characters of book in themselves. ~Zaneta Jung (Assistant Editor, Sterling Publishing)
  • I prefer the term quality assurance [instead of gatekeeper]. As much as I love art and I love authors and I love books, I think of the quote in Ratatouille from the food critic, “I don’t like food; I LOVE it. If I don’t love it, I don’t swallow.”  ~ (Editorial Director, Jolly Fish Press)

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  • If you aren’t working on and submitting at least seven things a year, then what the hell are you doing? ~Jane Yolen
  • Never neglect and forget your heart books. These are the books the rest of us need to read. ~Jane Yolen
  • Where does the character story start? Start on the day that’s different. ~Wendy Mass
  • We totally get a do-over when we wake up every morning. ~Wendy Mass
  • If we keep doing what we’ve always done, we keep getting what we’ve already got. ~Wendy Mass

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  • How did we all end up in this room together? All these details of your journey of how you go there, that’s your best asset as a writer. ~Patrick Carman
  • When you collaborate, don’t think “What am I going to get out of this?” but think “How can I help make this person’s dream come true?” Collaborating is bigger than networking. ~Patrick Carman
  • Intuition and inspiration can only happen in the moment. ~Kathleen Rushall (Agent, Andrea Brown Literary Agency)
  • Your dream agent is the one who adores the hell out of your work. ~Jess Keating
  • Unused creativity is not benign. If it’s not being put to use or being fulfilled, it leads to anxiety. (I failed to mark in my notes whether it was Kathleen Rushall or Jess Keating, who presented this workshop together.)
  • Do a $50 job likes it’s a $500 job, and then you’ll start getting $500 jobs. ~Jarrett J. Krosoczka
  • I’m being invited into a kid’s imagination and that is a privilege and a hallowed space to occupy. ~Jarrett J. Krosoczka
  • I had my sketch book, and I was bored. And that is a wonderful thing to do. ~Jarrett J. Krosoczka
  • Your best achievement is just around the corner. ~Jarrett J. Krosoczka

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  • Dialogue is not about translating real-life situations; it’s about giving your best impression of it. ~Linda Camacho (Agent, Prospect Agency)
  • It is so easy to get lost in your own world. You’re falling in love, and that’s great, but sometimes you have to rein it in. ~Linda Camacho (Agent, Prospect Agency)
  • Likeability is boring to strive for. It’s okay for characters to have positive characteristics, but they should make mistakes. You want them to be imperfect; it makes them “human.” ~Rebecca Podos (Agent, Rees Literary Agency)
  • Writing books you are passionate about makes it easy for kids to fall in love with your books. ~Colby Sharp
  • Graphic novels are complex forms of texts, and no kid should ever be stopped from reading that. ~
  • Being a mommy doesn’t mean you can’t be a real artist. ~Amitha Knight
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