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Crafting Stories and Laying Carpet with Ron Scheer Author of The Forager

I always enjoy introducing new authors to readers and today I have the pleasure of hosting Ron Scheer, debut author of the YA dystopian The ForagerLike many of us writers, Ron works another job in addition to writing and he offered to share the unique perspective a carpet installer can bring to the writing process. Welcome, Ron!

The Forager (1)Let’s face it, I’m a carpet installer first and writer second. Someday I hope to reverse those roles, but until that happens I still have a family who thinks they need things like food, clothing, shelter, and iphones. While at first glance the two occupations may seem drastically different there are more similarities than you might think. To be good at any profession a worker must have the specific tools, skills, and knowledge required to make a customer happy.

First, a note on quality:

Whether that customer is looking to buy a book or hire the services of a tradesman, they want the highest quality workmanship. No customer is going to be happy if I leave their home with wrinkles in their brand new carpet.  A manuscript with holes in the plot, typos, changing points of view, (switching between first and third person) or submitted in any manner other than what the publisher stipulates is the same kind of unacceptable, shoddy workmanship.

Once the customer and I have established that installing carpet is hard work and deserves its fair amount of compensation the job begins. Much like the preliminary work that goes into a book, I have to do my homework. Measuring the job, figuring the square footage, and telling the customer how much carpet they’ll need. Then telling the customer that no I can’t do the job correctly with less, quit asking.

The outline of the story is the writer’s guide. If it’s done correctly the story follows in a natural flow. This is the stories tack-strip (if you’re not familiar, these are the strips with the small, really sharp nails that go next to the wall and hold the carpet tight after its stretched.) If the outline is done wrong, the story doesn’t stay tight and you’ve just wasted your time. It’s important to note while hammering in the tack-strip that at all costs avoid hitting your thumb. If you hit it hard enough, it will explode just like a smashed grape. (Believe me, I’ve done it.)

Next comes the carpet padding, or cushion if you like being precise. This is the first draft of your story. You’ve got the idea down. Its base is firm, yet there’s room for it to give a little. And let’s face it, all first drafts need to give a little (or in my case a lot).

You might think the final step is stretching in the carpet, you’d be wrong. Stretching the carpet can be compared to your second draft. Now we’re getting somewhere. The story is definitely readable, and to an unpracticed eye it might even seem presentable. But the work is not done.

The last and final step to installing a carpet, the one that makes customers stand up and take notice. The one that insures that the next time they need an install they’ll call me, is the final attention to detail. Just like carefully going over your manuscript and removing all those loose words that simply do not need to be there, a good installer will always vacuum the new carpet, removing any stray fibers and use this opportunity to give his work a final look to make sure that everything is the way it’s supposed to be. (Yes, I’m a guy, and I vacuum.)

My favorite part of the job is when the customer/publisher looks at the final product, holds their hand to their mouth and and says, “Oh Wow, I love it!”

The Forager Blurb:

It’s been thirty years since the economy collapsed, and all Dillon has ever known is a world without electricity or medicine, living in a community constantly under the threat of starvation as they struggle to feed the rest of the country.

Orphaned and alone, unsure of his future, Dillon serves as a lookout, watching for the bands of Scavengers that prey on towns like his—while also watching for the mayor’s twin sons, who are bent on terrorizing him.

When a Forager rides into town, he opens Dillon’s eyes to the possibility of a different life. And when a Scavenger attack leaves the Forager injured, he sends Dillon out on a mission that may mean the difference between life and death for the mayor’s missing daughter. Dillon is about to find more than a way to help his community—he’s about to find himself.

The Forager can be purchased at the MuseItUp bookstore.

photoAbout the Author:

Ron Scheer lives in the heart of the heartland with his wonderful wife, a daughter, and a son. He spends his days selling and installing carpet. His nights, however, are devoted to books. Whether reading or writing, there are always words at his fingertips. The Forager is his first novel.

Meet Fran on the Blog Tour for Impervious by Heather Letto

I am excited to be a part of the blog tour for Heather Letto’s YA dystopian IMPERVIOUS. In celebration of her debut release, Heather has a special giveaway running. Be sure to check out the Rafflecopter below for a chance to win!
Impervious Blurb:
The residents of Impervious are the remnant—survivors of the War of Annihilation. And though the city is chockfull of pleasures to tantalize and entertain, a beast lurks in its corners haunting the residents with its presence. The Beast—a mysterious and terminal illness―has killed off most of Generations One, Two and Three. And as Gen-Four prepares to take the stage a provocative, yet questionable, new method to avoid an untimely death becomes a cultural rage.

But Fran is counter-cultural. And living off the grid in true rebel fashion, her life is far from opulent. Scurrying through dark tunnels, searching for hot meals and ditching the holographic security team encompass most of her day. However, she views it as a healthy trade-off. Unaccountability means The Council can’t steal her sliver of hope―a belief that she’ll see The Epoch arrive before the beast can pull her into its fetid embrace.

After losing her mother and then her Rebel mentor, however, she grasps painfully onto the splintered sliver, until a new hope is born. First through Pete. And then through a miraculous discovery.

But the question still haunts her…

Can she outrun The Beast?

INTERVIEW WITH FRAN:

Hi all! Heather Letto here with a funny story–I sent Fran an email not too long ago, asking if she wouldn’t mind making an appearance for today’s blog stop. She said, sure… if I was willing to throw a few donuts and a Big Gulp into the kitty.

So, sitting with me today, fresh out of the Impervious air vents, with a box of Dunkin’s finest in her lap, would you welcome Gen-Four’s most elusive Rebel, Fran Monde.

Fran: (Waving a chocolate cake donut dipped in sprinkles) Hey.

Heather: Do you mind if I call you Fran or do you prefer Frannie?Fran: (Stuffs donut into her mouth and rolls her eyes.)

Heather: Great. Fran it is. So let’s start with your hometown, Fran. Although it wasn’t your favorite place, I’m sure the readers would love to hear about the city. What can you tell us about the lifestyle of an Impervieite (and yours before you became a Rebel)?

Fran: Well, you might notice as you thumb through my story, food plays a pretty central role in the lives of underground dwellers.

Heather: Duly noted. Why is that?

Fran: (Shrugs) I’m not sure how to explain it. I was just always hungry underground.

Heather: And obviously still are. (chuckles)

Fran: (Snarky laugh.) Maybe it’s because there’s really not much to do. It’s kind of boring actually. I spent a lot of my free time as a kid just wandering the Agora, snacking, gaming… that’s about it.

Heather: Hmm. Fair enough. What about Pete?

Fran: (Stuffs the remainder of the donut into her mouth and licks each finger) What about him?

Heather: Like him?

Fran: Duh.

Heather: Love him?

Fran: Sheesh. No comment. (Grabs second donut.)

Heather: Okay, how about that weird name your brother called you? Some sort of worm?

Fran: Wickworm?

Heather: Yes, that’s it. What’s that all about?
Fran: Well, if you Google the word, you’d see that A Wickworm is a worm, or parasite, that
lives in the intestines of an animal. You may not be aware of this, but the air vents of impervious are kind of like the guts of the city… therefore—
Heather: Ah yes…. You’d be the worm.

Fran: Exactly. (Winks at me.)

Heather: Listen, I know you don’t have a lot of time here today, but I do have one final question that I think a lot of the readers would want to know.

Fran: (Nods her head) I’m listening.

Heather: Retter. Is there a crush happening there?

Fran: (Face blossoms into a cherry) Nah. Ret’s just a guy. Well, a very muscular guy. With tawny eyes….

Heather: (snapping fingers) Hello? You still with us, Fran?

Fran: I gotta go. (grabs box of donuts and stomps off).

Heather: (Clears throat.) Well. Thanks, Fran, for gracing us with your presence. (Sighs)

About Heather Letto:

Heather considers herself but a worker in the field with a desire to share truth through the art of good story. In real life, she’s the proud mother of two grown sons and lives part-time in Northern Illinois with her husband, but scurries off to warmer climates when the mercury takes a dive on the thermometer. As well as The Ascension Series, Heather contributes to WHOAwomen magazine, The Fit Christian, Tween Girls and God, Devotion Magazine as well as Swagga for Christ Ministry.

Impervious is available in 

e-book and paperback at:

 
 

PODs by Michelle Pickett Playlist

Michelle Pickett, author of  the YA dystopian PODs, and I are doing a blog swap today and talking our writing playlists. Check out my Elixir Bound playlist over on her blog. Welcome, Michelle!

PODs_cover7HighRES (1)First, thank you for hosting me today and allowing me to share a little about my creative process through music. I have a fairly long playlist for PODs. I’ve listed the songs for you, but I’ve picked a few of my favorite songs/scenes and included some explanation of how the song fit in the scene or the character’s feelings at that time in the story. I hope if you’ve read the book it gives you a little better insight into the workings of the mind of the character, and if you haven’t read the book it’ll make you curious enough to want to. 🙂

PODs Playlist

Theme Song: If Today Was You Last Day, Nickelback

David and Eva’s Song: End of The World, Blake Lewis

  • Burn it Down, Linkin Park
  • Can’t Let You Go, Adam Lambert (David: Chapters 18 & 19)
  • Can’t Take My Eyes Off Of You, Muse
  • Catalyst, Linkin Park (Chapter 25)
  • Crawl Through the Fire, Adam Lambert (Chapter 26)
  • Daylight, Maroon5 (Chapters 3 and 14)
  • Dream a Little Dream of Me, Mama Cass (Chapters 17 and 18)
  • First Light, Adam Lambert
  • Get Here, Justin Guarini
  • Here with Me, Dido
  • If I Ain’t Got You, Alicia Keys
  • I Miss You (slipped away), Avril Lavigne (Chapter 4)
  • I’m Only Me When I’m with You, Taylor Swift
  • Kick In The Teeth, Papa Roach (Eva: Chapter 23)
  • Kiss Me, Sixpence None The Richer
  • No Matter What, Papa Roach (David: Chapter 24)
  • Savin’ Me, Nickleback (Eva: Chapter 22)
  • Tangled Up in You, Staind (Chapter 13)
  • The Kids From Yesterday, My Chemical Romance (Chapter 5)
  • The Only Hope for Me is You, My Chemical Romance (Chapter 19)
  • The Truth, David Cook (Chapter 19)
  • This Means War, Nickelback (Eva: Chapter 26)
  • To Make You Feel My Love, Kris Allen (Eva: Chapter 9)
  • Twilight Time, The Platters (Chapters 17 and 18)
  • Until I Find You Again, Richard Marx
  • Want, Adam Lambert
  • When You’re Gone, Avril Lavigne

Music inspires many people. I find that sometimes a certain song has lyrics that describe a scene, or maybe the song evokes a certain feeling that I find moves me as I write. Some songs in the PODs playlist have chapters listed next to them and some don’t. Some fit so well with a scene that every time I hear the song I immediately think of that scene in the book (even now when I hear the song I still think of the book!). Some songs just give me a general feeling of the book or chapter as a whole, or the relationship between David and Eva.

I think the theme song of the book and David and Eva’s song are pretty self-explanatory. So I’ll skip them and share a few of my favorite songs and the scenes they coincide with.

(If you haven’t read the book the following contains mild spoilers).

The first song that really resonates with me is Avril Lavigne’s “Slipped Away” or “I Miss You” (I’ve seen it referred to by both names). I listened to it over and over while I wrote the scenes, especially the flashback scene, when Eva is saying goodbye to her parents. There is also a scene in quarantine when she is lying in bed thinking of them and parts of her life with them—I listened to the song while writing that, too. I have to admit, I cried writing those scenes. I’ve had some readers write to me and say they cried while reading it, which makes me feel like I’ve done my job.

One of my favorite scenes in the book between David and Eva is the picnic scene. I won’t go into too much detail about what happens in case there are people reading this who haven’t read the book yet, but it was a scene I included to show what a sweet, good guy David is and how much he genuinely loved spending time with Eva. The song that goes along with that song is Staind’s “Tangled Up in You.” The song could easily have been their theme song.

A song that I thought conveyed how the fights between the survivors and the Infected might feel is Adam Lambert’s “Crawl Through the Fire.” I listed it as a song for chapter 26, but, actually, it could be applied to any fight scene. The same goes for “Catalyst” by Linkin Park.

Okay, there’s one thing that I keep hearing from readers: “David became so sexist after the PODs.” Okay, well, I can see how one might think so, but the song you need to listen to in order to understand a little about what was going through his head is Papa Roach’s “No Matter What.” Eva had just left the safety of the village to be with him. He felt responsible for putting her in danger, and, therefore, became a little (a lot) obsessive about keeping her safe.  “No matter what, I got your back; I’ll take a bullet for you if it comes to that; I swear to God that in the bitter end; we’re gonna be the last ones standing”(Papa Roach, No Matter What). David felt those lyrics and would have died to keep Eva safe—without question.

The Second thing I hear from readers is that they are glad Eva didn’t put up with David’s sexist crap. Score one for Eva.  And “This Means War” by Nickelback is her song and it shows in Chapter 26 when she screams to the other woman to fight with her and stop cowering behind the men. She started to feel empowered and realized she could take some control of her life back. And even though it freaked David out (because it scared him, not because he’s sexist), she started to bulldoze her way through the Infected.

Lastly, a song that really speaks to how a character was feeling during a time in the book is “Can’t Let You Go” by Adam Lambert. This song belongs to David during chapters 18 and 19. I’ve caught a lot of flak from readers about his “dumping” Eva and then watching her every night when she’d go to the meadow looking for him.  What they’ve seemed to miss was WHY he went to the meadow. And WHY he dumped her. Does someone just break-up with someone and then for kicks tread through zombie filled forests to go sit and watch the person he broke up with? Not unless he has a good reason. And what was David’s reason? Well, listen to the song. I think it explains his pain. He wanted Eva to move on…have a normal life. And he knew he couldn’t give that to her. But, he couldn’t quite let go.

If you’ve read the book you know what happened after the break-up in the meadow…what stunt Eva pulled in chapter 22 (Savin’ Me by Nickelback goes with this scene). Which was exactly what David was afraid she’d do, and that brings everything back to David’s sexist, over protective behavior mentioned above.

Thank you so much for having me today. I appreciate you opening your blog to me. I’ve really enjoyed sharing how music helped shape the characters and story of PODs.

~Michelle

Buy Links for PODs:

Amazon ׀ Barnes&Noble ׀ Books-A-Million  The Book Depository ׀

Buy Links for Milayna:

Amazon ׀ Barnes&Noble ׀ The Book Depository

Buy Links for The Concilium Series

Amazon ׀ Barnes&Noble ׀ MuseItUp

My work includes:

Young adult books in paperback and ebook format:

The Amazon Bestselling young adult novel PODs

Milayna, March 2014

Milayna’s Angel (Milayna #2), September 2014

The Infected, a PODs novel, November 2014

The Innocent (Milayna #3), April 2015.

Adult Urban Fantasy in ebook format

Concilium, available now

Concilium: The Departure, available now

I always love to hear from readers, bloggers and other authors!

Find me here:

Website:          www.Michelle-Pickett.com

Email:              Michelle@Michelle-Pickett.com

Blog:               www.Michelle-Pickett.com/blog

Facebook:        www.Facebook.com/michellepickettauthor

Twitter:           http://www.twitter.com/michelle_kp

Goodreads:     http://goodreads.com/michelle-pickett

Snapshot_20130721_16About the Author:

I’m a wife, mother, reader and writer, although not always in that order. Between helping my twin eight year-old daughters with their second grade homework and my twelve year-old son with his sixth grade homework (which I’ve recently learned I am NOT smarter than a fifth (or sixth) grader, thank you very much Jeff Foxworthy), and being a football mom (GO BULLDOGS!) I write young adult urban fantasies, science/fiction and paranormal romances and have recently started dabbling in young adult and new adult contemporary romance.

I was born and raised in Flint, Michigan. I’m now live in a sleepy suburb of Houston, Texas with my extremely supportive, not to mention gorgeous husband, three school-aged kids, a 125 pound labradoodle that thinks he’s a lap dog, and a very persnickety cat.

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