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Mommy’s Night Before Christmas
by Katie L. Carroll
‘Twas the night before Christmas, the kids were in bed
Anxiously awaiting the Big Man in Red;
The stockings weren’t hung (we don’t have a chimney),
We just set them down in front of the TV.
Who am I kidding? The kids weren’t sleeping,
The baby was teething, drooling, and weeping;
The preschooler was playing with a million toys,
Driving his cars and making lots of noise.
Half an hour later, the baby passed out,
His brother went to bed (not without a good pout);
I let out a great big sigh of relief,
Then I looked around and thought, “Oh, good grief!”
The house was a mess, the laundry never-ending,
And there was still that ornament that needed mending.
At least we were done hiding that stupid elf,
Went back where he came from, him and his shelf;
Hours passed, we thought we were finally done;
We found more gifts, the fun had just begun;
We were out of wrapping paper and tape,
Reused gift bags put us back in good shape;
I sat down to relax, put my feet up,
Snuggled into a blanket with my tea cup;
A bang outside roused me to my feet,
I peeked out the curtains, looked down the street.
“I don’t think it’s the neighbors,” Daddy said;
“What? You think it’s Santa in his big sled?”
He went to check it out, shot me a look,
And told me to go back to reading my book;
A minute later, I heard a great yell,
And said under my breath, “What the hell?”
I put on my shoes, grabbed the monitor,
Slipped into a coat, and stomped out the door;
The clear winter night brought no Christmas snow,
Instead moonlight washed the yard in a soft glow;
Daddy stood there staring up at the roof;
I hissed, “What are you doing, you big doof?”
He merely pointed, his face full of fear,
And gave a soft whisper, “It’s a reindeer.”
Now, I haven’t believed since I was six,
Thought surely his eyes must be playing tricks;
Then I heard a stomping and a nicker
That made my heart beat a little quicker;
Looking up, I saw the brown muzzle, red nose,
The Fat Man himself, and I simply froze.
Daddy and I exchanged a look of wonder,
The shock could’ve put us six feet under;
I shook my head and came to my senses,
Glared at Santa, went on the offensive;
“Get off my roof, your reindeer too,” I hissed;
I glared at Santa, feeling really pissed;
He laughed, “Don’t end up on my naughty list.”
Clearly this guy wasn’t getting my gist.
“With all due respect, get the hell out of here;
If you wake my kids, you won’t see next year.”
Quiet as a shadow those reindeer took flight,
Santa whispered, “Merry Christmas and good night.”
Clever poem! Ah, to be the parents of young kids on Christmas. I’m already exhausted.
Thanks, Kimberly! Christmas is exhausting with little ones, but it’s also more exciting. Having the boys has really brought out the Christmas spirit in me.
Hilarious. But so true. You know you’re a parent when the peace and quiet of sleeping children is the best gift you can imagine.
And then once they’re sleeping, you’re too tired to do anything! At least that’s always how it is for me.
Nice! 😀
I figure you can have a neat and tidy but also empty house, or one brimming with work-for-Mom. I’d take the latter most of the time.
I’ll take the latter as well, and maybe a glass of wine once the kiddos go to bed. 😉
Thanks for the laugh, Katie. You are certain to be on Santa’s naughty list now.
LOL! I think a lot of us parents end up on that list.
This is so cute. Brings back memories of my boys. Sure do miss them. But they grow up. Enjoy.
Thanks, Beverly! They do. They do.
Hi Katie! I’m new to your blog. That’s a very clever poem. 🙂 Personally, I find poetry incredibly hard and requires the kind of skill that would take me ages (if ever) to get right. So congrats!
Hi and welcome, Anna! Always happy to have someone new stop in to the blog. Honestly, I don’t consider myself much of a poet. Having a template in the original poem to copy made it much easier to compose this little fun one. Glad you enjoyed it! 🙂